PROLOGUE
Page #1
4 panels
Panel: 1
Characters: None
Happening: A drawing of a city, with people walking around everywhere. A narrator is speaking in the background
Dialogue: Narrator - "Our world isn't like any other. People here aren't all the same."
Panel: 2
Characters: None
Happening: A drawing of the ocean, (which is VERY violent, by the way. Huge crushing waves, etc.) as a wave rises high into the air.
Dialogue: Narrator - "Our world has no official name. It's called The Nameless World, due to the lack of a better name."
Panel: 3
Characters: Pyro, Tsukurimasu, Shizen, - (His entire outfit is made out of plants. He has pants made out of vines that have been sewn together, and for a top he wears a tree bark breastplate. His hair is green and tied in a ponytail, just like Pyro and Tsukurimasu.) Manami, - (http://burnedeyes.smackjeeves.com/comics/342834/daisuki/) Shibou (Shibou wears a straitjacket. Its not always hooked up. On his belt, he carries an Urumi, a special type of whip-like sword made of flexible metal and using multiple blades. His hair is blond, and is worn in a very messy style, breaking the commonality of male gods wearing their hair in a ponytail.)
Happening: A picture of the main god, the God of the Forge, the Goddess of Love, and the God of Nature, Pyro who's standing with his scythe by his side, Tsukurimasu who is hammering a sword on an anvil, Shizen who's reading a book as he hangs on a vine-made hammock, Shibou is leaning against a wall, his straitjacket all buttoned up, and Manami, who is hugging a cute little animal.
Dialogue: Narrator - "The Nameless world is different because we know the gods exist. There is no doubt. We even know their true names."
Panel: 4
Characters: None
Happening: A picture of a meadow, with kids playing in the middle.
Dialogue: Narrator - "We also have something else that separates us from the other worlds."
Page #2
3 Panels
Panel: 1
Characters: The two kids
Happening: The two kids turn toward the reader as they gaze in horror at a site that can't be seen until next panel.
Dialogue: Narrator - "They are a second race of humans, who go by the name of
The Burned."
Panel: 2
Characters: None
Happening: A man riding on horseback, with a mask over his face, spiky hair, and a bloody sword in his hand appears in front of the two children.
Dialogue: Narrator - "They possess incredible powers, but at a price."
Panel: 3
Characters: Man on horseback, Two children
Happening: The children are cowering in fear of the man on horseback, as he raises his sword high in the air.
Dialogue: Narrator - "For you see, they must be endangered."
Page #3
4 Panels
Panel: 1
Characters: Horseback man, brother, Sister (wounded)
Happening: The horseback man has just attacked the younger girl, spilling blood.
Dialogue: Narrator - "Pyro, the God of the Burned, will take favor in some select people, mostly young children and honorable men and women."
Panel: 2
Characters: The boy, The girl in his arms
Happening: The boy has grabbed the wounded girl in his arms as he looks up at the evil man.
Dialogue: None
Panel: 3
Characters: The horseman
Happening: The horseman has his sword raised above his head as he is about to swing it at the boy.
Dialogue: None
Panel: 4
Characters: None
Happening: One sees a pair of eyes wide open, seemingly bloodshot
Dialogue: Narrator - "Pyro chooses your fate when you are about to die."
Page #4
1 Panel
Panel: 1
Characters: Boy
Happening: A huge burst of energy shoots out of the boy, the origin coming from his right eye. He is screaming, with his mouth wide open, and is covering his eye.
Dialogue: Boy - "GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"
Page #5
3 Panels
Panel: 1
Characters: The boy
Happening: The boy is holding his hand over his eye, as a huge rock rises up behind him.
Dialogue: None
Panel: 2
Characters: Horseman
Happening: The horseman is now scared, fear overtaking him.
Dialogue: Horseman - "Guh..."
Panel: 3
Characters: Horseman, Rock, Boy
Happening: The horseman is slammed into the ground by the giant rock, dying a gruesome death as blood can be seen pooling out from under the stone
Dialogue: Narrator - "That's every Burned's story."
Page #6
3 Panels
Panel: 1
Characters: Orphiritus (See first and last panel of http://i37.tinypic.com/2vkhxsl.jpg for picture)
Happening: Orphiritus is walking along, carrying the box filled with all of the sacred weapons. He has a tired expression.
Dialogue: Narrator The Nameless World is in no way peaceful. Recently, a huge war has erupted.
Panel: 2
Characters: Tsukurimasu
Happening: A picture of Tsukurimasu at the forge, hammering away at a sword.
Dialogue: Narrator Tsukurimasu, God of the forge, had been assigned by Pyro, Creator of all life, to create fifteen almighty weapons, crafted out of the worlds most precious gems. These weapons could boost the powers of one of the Burned...
Panel: 3
Characters: Orphiritus
Happening: Orphiritus, with a panicked expression, trips, dropping the box of weapons from the heavens.
Dialogue: Narrator ...To the level of the gods!
Page #7
4 Panels
Panel: 1
Characters: None
Happening: A picture of the sacred weapons (Not all of them are swords) falling from the heavens.
Dialogue: Narrator The war started the day Orphiritus, a minor god and assistant to Tsukurimasu, dropped the sacred weapons from Tengoku, the gods realm.
Panel: 2
Characters: None
Happening: Picture of a large expansive plain.
Dialogue:
Panel: 3
Characters: None
Happening: A smaller picture of the same plain, but this time, you can see weapons laying and pierced into the ground.
Dialogue: Narrator It was that day that the weapons landed in the place now known as the Plains of Fire.
Panel: 4
Characters: Random passerby
Happening: A person walking by notices the weapons.
Dialogue: Narrator This would soon lead to chaos and death.
Page #8
2 Panels
Panel: 1
Characters: A bunch of random people
Happening: A huge battle is occurring, with many people killing one another.
Dialogue: Narrator Only a few days after the weapons were discovered, battle erupted. Blood was shed in the plains, and the grass and trees were set ablaze.
Panel: 2
Characters: Two men
Happening: A picture of a man stabbing his sword through another mans heart.
Dialogue: Narrator Yet, after many days of battle...
Pages #9 and 10
1 Huge Panel
Panel: 1
Characters: 15 silhouettes of people.
Happening: A picture of 15 peoples silhouettes against a sunset. Each person is holding a different kind of weapon. No two are alike.
Dialogue: Narrator ...The fighting was finally over. But even as fifteen victors walked away from the bloodshed, everyone knew that war was on the horizon.















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